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Writing Tip/Reader Insight - why readers put your book down

I noticed a thread I found invaluable as a writer in a reading group I'm in so I thought I'd briefly share the results. They were discussing what makes them put a book down. I have compiled the reasons and the number next to them is how many people agreed with that point. As you may notice there are also conflicting reasons. I thought this information might be helpful to know (clearly it was not divided by genre).


#1 reason: Doesn’t catch interest very quickly

33 people

Usually stated in the first chapter but some readers were more forgiving up to 30% of the book.


#2 Too Much Description -- 16 people


#3 Awful writing -- 12 people


Tied #4 -- all 6 votes each:

Too much filler

Repetition of words/phrases

Not invested in character


Tied #5 - 5 votes each:

Lack of Research

Weak/badly written female characters

Hard to read (dialogue accents/ weird character names)


Tied #6 - 4 votes each:

No/Bad editing

Too many characters at once


Tied #7 - 3 votes each:

First Person POV

Switching times then/now

Lack of Character development

Lack of Depth


Tied #8 - 2 votes each:

Ridiculous Story Line

Character doing something they know not to do

Lack of Punctuation

Typos

Unnecessary Sex Scenes

Talked at/instead of part of

Long Chapters

Infodump


Things with only one reader vote but mentioned as a reason to stop reading:

No Climax

Confusing Timelines

New character/place every chapter

Recycled Plot

Too Much Backstory

Forced Slang

Too much angst inner dialogue

Too many adjectives

Cliches

Annoying Character

Simple Writing

Run On Sentences

Short Sentences

Repetitive descriptors (including synonyms)

Always using said as dialogue tag

Overly complicated beginning

Traumatic events for shock value

Excessive Profanity

Child/Animal Abuse

Not clearly marked sex scenes

Overly preachy


While many of the lower voted things could probably be added to 'awful writing' I felt it was important to keep it separate when they specifically what they found was awful about the writing. Many just said 'awful writing' and left it at that.


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